Emotive writing

WE started the game and I got the ball. And I was sprinting down the wing and someone caught up to me so had to go fast pace. He went slide tackled me and it felt like I had no legs. I was off for the whole match and I was still lying beside the wing and my mum  pick me up and took me off the pitch and I was still crying off the pitch. And mum took me home.

The music reminded me of a funeral,in the war and a movie.

This is my emotive writing and I had to write about what it feels like to be in something.

I wish

Thinking task

Read the sentence below. Think deeply about your answer.

Make sure your answer is something that your teacher does not already know!

Add it to the tracking sheet when you are finished.

I wish my teacher knew…….I can’t go to sleep because I get nightmares about ghosts.

War

This would be scary because you could die!!!. But you could survive. You know how? You would have to go in a plane really fast to a safe country like New Zealand. Lucky that we live in New Zealand.