Stan Walker

my writing goal is putting the right punctuation.

Stan walker is a maori New Zealand singer and he  amazing at it. Stan walker was a bit of a naughty boy and then his mum took Stan walker to church and then he sang there.

In the early life Stan walker partners went to jail for having household problems. In new plymouth Stan walker was a bad boy there. There were some problems in the house because of the parents.

He was really happy when he made it in the music competition I think that the  judges where loving it. Stan walker was really nervous when he went on the stage and when he came off he was really inspired when he came off the stage. The talent he had was amazing on the stage.

Stan walker won the kids choice in 2010 and his achievements have been really good for him and now he is one of the best NZ singers. He won the vodafone people's choice also he had the must music on the radio.

Stan Walker Is going to have an amazing career of singing because he has amazing fans that's gonna help get through everything. Stan walker made a company for his music with his mum and dad. I think Stan’s company's gonna end because Stan’s parents are gonna get to old and they have to stop.

Emotive writing

WE started the game and I got the ball. And I was sprinting down the wing and someone caught up to me so had to go fast pace. He went slide tackled me and it felt like I had no legs. I was off for the whole match and I was still lying beside the wing and my mum  pick me up and took me off the pitch and I was still crying off the pitch. And mum took me home.

The music reminded me of a funeral,in the war and a movie.

This is my emotive writing and I had to write about what it feels like to be in something.

I wish

Thinking task

Read the sentence below. Think deeply about your answer.

Make sure your answer is something that your teacher does not already know!

Add it to the tracking sheet when you are finished.

I wish my teacher knew…….I can’t go to sleep because I get nightmares about ghosts.

My Special Place

                                                  my special place

A football field is my special place, when my mum drives me to the field I am so excited.

Then when I put my bright yellow boots on and  then I did  some shots at the goal  with my dad on a nice sunny evening.

Then my mum came and did some shots with me and dad. My mum kept on toe hacking the ball, and then she came off for jack and then jack went to be the goalie and then Jack got hurt because I kick the ball into Jacks tummy.

When jack came off it was just me and dad then I did a cross and I A curve in to the goal.Dad wanted to do the cross bar challenge.

     

              

Sharks

This is the most dangerous shark in the world.The great white is one of the fastest sharks in the world. It's weird because sharks only eat 5 people a year and hippos eats 5000 people a year. And a shark is 18 m long. The megalodon was the biggest shark in the world.